Place and Time Workshop #2

I looked at Will's paper. He is writing a personal Essay. I liked the place he chose to write about. I enjoyed all the scenery he incorporated into his paper.

Will had a few grammar issues and needed to fix his past and present tense.

I also looked at Arija's paper. I loved that she incorporated footnotes into her paper, and she chose to translate certain words. I like that she took the tone of a nine year old for her first vignette and and 16 year old for her second vignette.

Arija had a couple of grammar issues, but other than that she did great.